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Harper Lee has used simplicity and wisdom together through Atticus and the case to incorporate a rock-hard understanding to the reader about the truth of the trial. Atticus proves completely to the court and the reader that this case was totally unnecessary. "To begin with," he said, "this case should never have come to trial. This case is as simple as black and white." The entire court, the jury, and the reader know Tom Robinson is innocent and if it were not for racial discrimination, it would be a simple case with an obvious verdict. Atticus is smart and knows that the trial was unjust because of racism. He accepted that case, ready to lose, but also ready to prove to everyone that Tom had done nothing wrong. With his wisdom, Atticus reveals Tom's innocence in a clever, straightforward way that is understood by all.

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It is a very nice paragraph, you followed the prompt great and it was very easy to understand. I like your use of words and your examples, and I didn’t notice any mistakes. Great Job!

-Ciara

You have a really good paragraph. Your sentences go together really nicely and it all makes sense. I really did not notice any mistakes either. You did a nice job and your paragraph seems to be what Mr. Davis wanted.

-Bryn

Yeah I’d have to agree this is an amazing paragraph with tons of detail and a great choice of words what you’re saying is very clear. Also I think it follows the prompt perfectly. Nice work, Amy.

~Jess~

I agree with Ciara that you followed the prompt very well. It turned out very good, you supported your quote perfectly with a lot of examples. I think the paragraph is very good keep up the good work.

~*KaTiE*~

Very Nice. I don't see any needed revisions. Nice

-Andrew

Awesome. Nothing needs revised.

-Christian